Module 4 - Revising Business Messages Activity 2 - Identifying and Improving sentences with Flabby Expressions, Long-lead ins, Redundancies, Trite Business Phrases, Slangs and Buried Verbs (2 pts each) Instructions: . . Read each sentence carefully and identify them as (F) Flabby Expressions, (L) Long lead-ins, (R) Redundancies, (T)Trite Business Phrases, (S) Slang or (B) Buried Verb Use the letter in parenthesis to identify each sentence. Leave a space below and rewrite each one accordingly. Complete the exercise and save it as a PDF to upload it to Moodle. . . a. b. C. d. e. Because the proposals are exactly identical, we need not check each and every item. As per your request, we will no longer send e-mail offers. Enclosed please find a check in the amount of $700. Web-based customer service causes reduction in overall costs. Our team must be willing to think outside the box in coming up with marketing ideas that pop. In preparing this proposal, we must make an application of new government regulations. if you will refer back to the budget, you will see that there are provisions that prevent blowing the budget The office walls were painted beige in color. I am writing this letter to inform you that your homeowners' coverage expires soon. Despite the fact that we lost the contract, we must at this time move forward. f. 8 h