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MGMT 102 - Business Communications Case Assignment 1 Fall 2021 IMPORTANT INSTRUCTIONS 1. 2. To do well on this assignment, make sure that you understand the principles and techniques presented in the Resourer Book regarding business writing style and e-mail structure. You may also wish to use your Webster's Guide to Punctuation and Syle as a resource. Submit this assignment through Canvas by 11:59 pm on November 4. When you are ready to submit your answers, go to the ASSIGNMENTS module and click "Case Assignment 1 Subenission... Click "Submit Quiz" only when you are ready to submit the assignment to the instructor 3. 4. Directions: Carefully study both the scenario and e-mail message draft below. Then, answer each question. Scenario As a recent Sac State graduate, you are hoping to share your business writing skills with others (and make a few extra dollars, foo). You have set up a communication consulting business and designed a two-day workshop for business professionals who would like to improve their writing. A friend in San Diego has suggested a possible need for your services in her area. After some initial research, you have decided to plan a writing workshop for September 26 and 27. 2022. from 8 am to 5 pm each day. You are hoping for 25 participants, and are planning to rent a hotel meeting room for your workshop You have already put together a list of 20 potential hotels in the city of San Diego. Now you are ready to e-mail each hotel to request information about meeting space for your dates. (After you receive their responses, you will be able to select the most appropriate hotel for your workshop.) Your first contact is Tracey Nelson, the marketing manager at the San Diego Marriott. Your new assistant has just written the e-mail message draft below for your approval. However, because the assistant had received a low grade in Business Communications, you realize you will need to rewrite the message yourself, before sending it to the hotels -15 Is anything happening 3d E-mail Message Draft To: neg Tracey Nelson (tnelson@marriott.com) November 4, 2021 Date: Subject: se NIS (1)I am planning a two-day business writing workshop for professionals. (2/ It is my first workshop ever! (3) Therefore, I am writing to request information about meeting rooms at your hotel. (4) Please send this information to me as soon as possible. (5) My workshop will be held on September 26 and 27, 2022. (6) 1 am planning for 25 participants. (7) A necessary requirement is a U-shaped table setup. (8) Please apprise me of any group discounts or package deals at the Marriott. (9) Can you provide a price list for refreshments? (10) Also, can we rent audiovisual equipment from the hotel? (11) Finally, can you send me information about entertainment options there? A. Writing Questions (5 points each) As you answer Questions 1 through 3 below, assume you are sending your e-mail messages to the San Diego hotels on November 4 of this year. Feel free to create additional fictional information if necessary. 1. The e-mail message draft above is missing a subject line. Write an effective subject line that would be appropriate for the scenario described earlier. 2. Evaluate the first sentence of the e-mail message draft above. If this is effective, write "Correct... If not, create an appropriate first sentence. 3. The e-mail message draft above is missing a goodwill close. Write an appropriate goodwill close for the message, based on the scenario described earlier. B. Multiple Choice Questions (3 points each) Select your answers for Questions through 11 below based on the poorly written e-mail message draft above. 4. What is the style problem in Sentence 42 a. Abstract noun as simple subject b. Expletive c. Clich d. (sentence is effective) 5. What is the style problem in Sentence 7? a. Expletive b. Passive voice Redundancy d. (sentence is effective) CH 6. a. What is the style problem in Sentence 8? Passive voice b. Formal wording c. Abstract noun as simple subject d. (sentence is effective) 7. a. Which of the following sentences uses an expletive? Sentence 2 b. Sentence 3 Sentence 11 d (none of the above) c 8. Which of the following sentences uses an abstract noun as the simple subject? a. b. c. d. Sentence 1 Sentence 6 Sentence 7 (none of the above) 9. . a. Which of the following sentences use(s) a state-of-being verb? Sentence 2 b. Sentence 7 (both a and b) d. (none of the above) c. 10. Which of the following sentences uses negative wording? a. Sentence 5 b. Sentence 9 c. Sentence 10 d. (none of the above) 11. How many examples of passive voice does the message contain? a. b. c. d. NO 2 3 C. Most Important Question (1 point) Please make sure that the correct answer is also written in your personal calendar. 12. What is the date of our class final exam? a. b. C. d. December 14 December 15 December 16 December 25 MGMT 102 - Business Communications Case Assignment 1 Fall 2021 IMPORTANT INSTRUCTIONS 1. 2. To do well on this assignment, make sure that you understand the principles and techniques presented in the Resourer Book regarding business writing style and e-mail structure. You may also wish to use your Webster's Guide to Punctuation and Syle as a resource. Submit this assignment through Canvas by 11:59 pm on November 4. When you are ready to submit your answers, go to the ASSIGNMENTS module and click "Case Assignment 1 Subenission... Click "Submit Quiz" only when you are ready to submit the assignment to the instructor 3. 4. Directions: Carefully study both the scenario and e-mail message draft below. Then, answer each question. Scenario As a recent Sac State graduate, you are hoping to share your business writing skills with others (and make a few extra dollars, foo). You have set up a communication consulting business and designed a two-day workshop for business professionals who would like to improve their writing. A friend in San Diego has suggested a possible need for your services in her area. After some initial research, you have decided to plan a writing workshop for September 26 and 27. 2022. from 8 am to 5 pm each day. You are hoping for 25 participants, and are planning to rent a hotel meeting room for your workshop You have already put together a list of 20 potential hotels in the city of San Diego. Now you are ready to e-mail each hotel to request information about meeting space for your dates. (After you receive their responses, you will be able to select the most appropriate hotel for your workshop.) Your first contact is Tracey Nelson, the marketing manager at the San Diego Marriott. Your new assistant has just written the e-mail message draft below for your approval. However, because the assistant had received a low grade in Business Communications, you realize you will need to rewrite the message yourself, before sending it to the hotels -15 Is anything happening 3d E-mail Message Draft To: neg Tracey Nelson (tnelson@marriott.com) November 4, 2021 Date: Subject: se NIS (1)I am planning a two-day business writing workshop for professionals. (2/ It is my first workshop ever! (3) Therefore, I am writing to request information about meeting rooms at your hotel. (4) Please send this information to me as soon as possible. (5) My workshop will be held on September 26 and 27, 2022. (6) 1 am planning for 25 participants. (7) A necessary requirement is a U-shaped table setup. (8) Please apprise me of any group discounts or package deals at the Marriott. (9) Can you provide a price list for refreshments? (10) Also, can we rent audiovisual equipment from the hotel? (11) Finally, can you send me information about entertainment options there? A. Writing Questions (5 points each) As you answer Questions 1 through 3 below, assume you are sending your e-mail messages to the San Diego hotels on November 4 of this year. Feel free to create additional fictional information if necessary. 1. The e-mail message draft above is missing a subject line. Write an effective subject line that would be appropriate for the scenario described earlier. 2. Evaluate the first sentence of the e-mail message draft above. If this is effective, write "Correct... If not, create an appropriate first sentence. 3. The e-mail message draft above is missing a goodwill close. Write an appropriate goodwill close for the message, based on the scenario described earlier. B. Multiple Choice Questions (3 points each) Select your answers for Questions through 11 below based on the poorly written e-mail message draft above. 4. What is the style problem in Sentence 42 a. Abstract noun as simple subject b. Expletive c. Clich d. (sentence is effective) 5. What is the style problem in Sentence 7? a. Expletive b. Passive voice Redundancy d. (sentence is effective) CH 6. a. What is the style problem in Sentence 8? Passive voice b. Formal wording c. Abstract noun as simple subject d. (sentence is effective) 7. a. Which of the following sentences uses an expletive? Sentence 2 b. Sentence 3 Sentence 11 d (none of the above) c 8. Which of the following sentences uses an abstract noun as the simple subject? a. b. c. d. Sentence 1 Sentence 6 Sentence 7 (none of the above) 9. . a. Which of the following sentences use(s) a state-of-being verb? Sentence 2 b. Sentence 7 (both a and b) d. (none of the above) c. 10. Which of the following sentences uses negative wording? a. Sentence 5 b. Sentence 9 c. Sentence 10 d. (none of the above) 11. How many examples of passive voice does the message contain? a. b. c. d. NO 2 3 C. Most Important Question (1 point) Please make sure that the correct answer is also written in your personal calendar. 12. What is the date of our class final exam? a. b. C. d. December 14 December 15 December 16 December 25