Open up the attached word document and save it to your computer with your name included in the name of the file. Read the poor email and find as many mistakes as possible. Please note these mistakes in red ink below the poor email.

Without deleting the original text of the poor email or the notes you have made, make a revised email on the same page. Save the file and upload it here for grading.

SUBJECT LINE:Hey

Attention: Amy Wright:

How are you today?It was great seeing you the other day at lunch.I loved your casserole.I will try that recipe next week.

Please give me your feedback when I finish it.I find the employee benefits are not covering the necessities for dental/health and I have been receiving complaints that a half hour break for lunch is not long enough.Employees keep complaining and they would prefer to work longer and have a more enjoyable lunch break to get their personal errands done before coming back to their desk to work for the rest of the day.

Our dental and health benefits cover $400 a year for dental and 50% coverage on prescriptions and we do not have any privilege for professional services, such as chiropractors and physiotherapy.

Can we get this changed? I hope you think it is a good idea.

Sincerely,M. Mazza

HR Department