or co$-$workers. Revise and edit each draft, referring to the Revision Checklist on page $70.$ Turn in your revision and the final, reader$-$ready copy. As you revise, keep in mind that you may have to delete and add information, rearrange the order of information, and make the tone suitable for your readers. As you edit, make sure your sentences are clear and concise.

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TO: All workers

FROM: B$.$ J$.$ Blackwell

DATE: February $3,2016$

RE: Parking

The parking violations around here have gotten very, very bad. And the administration is provoked and wants some action taken. I don't blame them. I have been late for meetings several times in the last month because inconsiderate folks from