Organizing Paragraph Sentences

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YOUR TASK. In a memo to the college president, the athletic director argues for a new stadium scoreboard. One paragtaph will describe the old scoreboard and why it needs to be replaced. Study the following list of ideas for that paragraph.

The old scoreboard is a tired warhorse that was originally constructed in the $1970$ s$.$

It is now hard to find replacement parts when something breaks.

The old scoreboard is not energy efficient.

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Coca$-$Cola has offered to buy a new sports scoreboard in return for exclusive rights to sell soft drinks on campus.

The old scoreboard should be replaced for many reasons.

It shows only scores for football games.