Paragraph A$(1)$The main concern these citizen's have is the removal of barriers, but this legislation wouldn't provide these citizens with the remedy $\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_$ long been waiting for. $(2)$The bill would require municipalities, schools, transit systems, hospitals, universities and colleges to develop plans that identify barriers in their policies and programs. $(3)$There$\text{'}$s no requirement for these bodies to implement their plans or set deadlines to eliminate the barriers.Paragraph B$(4)$Jill Givens pledged more than two$-$years ago to enact legislation knocking down the barriers that stand in the way of people with disabilities. $(5)$The bill will be introduced next year. $(6)$It is a step in the right direction, but it will need $\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_$ amendment to bring about the changes demanded by the $1\mathrm{.}6$ million Victorians with disabilities. $(7)$The proposed law would raise public awareness of the many barriers that impede people with disabilities from working, going to school or simply $\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_$ a normal life.Paragraph C$(8)$Nor does the new Disabilities Act go beyond encouraging the private sector to make facilities, and services more accessible. $(9)$Nothing will happen if moral persuasion fails. $(10)$State officials and community advocates agree that part of the problem is the lack of common standards to define accessibility. $(11)$Two new councils will be created to set such standards and advise the government on future initiatives.Which of the following changes is needed in the text?Sentence $6$: change the comma after direction to a semicolon.Sentence $1$: change citizen's to citizens.Sentence $7$: change raise to rise.Sentence $11$: replace Two with Too