PART 1: Revise the following sentences by correcting the bolded clich. 1. The long-term prospects for...

 

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PART 1: Revise the following sentences by correcting the bolded clich. 1. The long-term prospects for the service are looking fairly bleak at this moment in time. 2. At the end of the day, it is the minister himself who has to make the decision. 3. The authorities announced that they would not tolerate drugs within the sport in any way, shape, or form. 4. Attached please find the memorandum on the new dress code policy that will be enforced in the upcoming weeks. 5. Referring to your letter regarding the problem encountered with your new laptop. 6. We wish to advise that during work hours, you stop spending your time on Facebook. PART 2: Talk about what you have learned. Provide an example of a clich that you have used (or heard or read about in your textbook that is not on the list above-you can also see a few more on this website: Avoiding Clichs) and in your own words, explain how you will revise the clich and why you, as a professional writer, should avoid clichs. PART 1: Revise the following sentences by correcting the bolded clich. 1. The long-term prospects for the service are looking fairly bleak at this moment in time. 2. At the end of the day, it is the minister himself who has to make the decision. 3. The authorities announced that they would not tolerate drugs within the sport in any way, shape, or form. 4. Attached please find the memorandum on the new dress code policy that will be enforced in the upcoming weeks. 5. Referring to your letter regarding the problem encountered with your new laptop. 6. We wish to advise that during work hours, you stop spending your time on Facebook. PART 2: Talk about what you have learned. Provide an example of a clich that you have used (or heard or read about in your textbook that is not on the list above-you can also see a few more on this website: Avoiding Clichs) and in your own words, explain how you will revise the clich and why you, as a professional writer, should avoid clichs.

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ANSWER PART 1 Revised sentences with clichs corrected The longterm prospects for the service are loo... View the full answer