Part 6: Use Parallel Language Rewrite these sentences so the language is parallel 12. We need more laboratory space, additional personnel is required, and we also need much more capital 13. Training seminars must be stimulating and a challenge. Part 7: Avoid Buzzwords and Figures of Speech Rewrite these sentences to eliminate buzzwords and figures of speech 14. Enclosed please find the list of customers that will be used in our promotion 15 As per your request, we are sending the contract under separate cover Part 8: Avoid It Is and There Is/Are Rewrite these sentences to improve clarity. 16. There is a password checker that can evaluate your password's strength automatically 17. There are computers in Internet cafs, at conferences, and in airport lounge, that should be considered unsafe for any personal use. 18. It is clear there are many younger managers who are eager but unprepared to assume leadership roles