Peer Response (first peer response due by 11:59 p.m. on Sunday; second peer response due by 11:59 p.m. on Tuesday)

Respond to the point of view expressed in at least one other person's post. Do you share the person's point of view? Why or why not?

First peer:

Reading this grammar lab, I realized the importance of parallel structure. From my understanding, parallel structure significantly enhances clarity and impact in writing. When ideas are presented in a consistent format, they are easier for readers to follow and comprehend. For example, "she likes hiking, biking, and swimming" is way better to comprehend than "she likes to hike, biking, and swimming' because of the consistent format. This rhythmic quality not only aids understanding but also emphasizes the importance of each activity, making the sentences more powerful. In summary, employing parallel structure is crucial for effective communications, as it provides clarity and enhances the overall aesthetic of the writing.

Second peer:

I've noticed that parallel structure is all about keeping things consistent in a sentence, especially when I'm listing things. It helps make my writing clearer and easier to understand. It helps the sentence flow better instead of being awkward. For example "We enjoyed making cookies, watching Christmas movies and driving to Christmas lights." flows better than "We enjoyed watching Christmas movies, making cookies, and drive to Christmas lights". Adding parallel structure into sentences can really improve how my writing sounds and how easily others can follow it. I also believe it helps keep readers interested because it is easier to read. It's a small tweak, but it makes a big difference in making my writing feel more consistent.