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This excerpt comes from a report on introducing new technology to company employees. Which of the suggestions listed ?below will help the writer improve the excerpt (1) Research that was conducted for this study dealt in large measure with the means to introduce new technology to employees who have been employed for long periods of time and who are resistant to change. (2) In a number of interviews with managers and supervisors, most of these interviewees felt that the reason for employee resistance must first be known before determining how it is possible to introduce new technology. (3) As a result, a survey was conducted to identify the primary reasons for employee resistance. (4) The following list summarizes the main findings for this resistance: failure to see that the benefits of using technology can balance out the cost of learning and implementing it, feeling overwhelmed at the thought of implementing new technology, and initial negative experiences with new technology. (5) Once these issues are addressed, mannagement may be more confident in its attempt to make significant changes in the way the company operates. "Improve accuracy by changing misspelling of mannagement in sentence 5 to management a Improve the clarity of sentence 2 by replacing phrases such as a number of and most of these interviewees bo with more-specific information Improve the clarity of the information by streamlining wordy phrases such as employees who have been co employed for long periods of time in sentence 1 all of the above do A writer is commenting on the first draft of a technical report written by another team member. Which of the following ?comments is the most appropriate You've really improved your editing skills, Brian. However, you still need work on other aspects of writing. For" a O example, your writing would be even better if you used more active voice. Similarly, your report would be even ".better if you used some bulleted lists to break up some of your longer paragraphs Section 3 does a great job of making a case for the importance of our usability testing. Perhaps we should also bO include a graph showing a decrease in customer-service calls since we started testing. We may also want to add a section on user feedback I'm working on several different projects right now. I've been able to proof the document. However, I leave it to" "you to check its organization. Also, I feel you didn't sell me on the benefits of usability testing .do Use Arial Bold for all headings. Change on-line to online. Delete section 4. Add a map of the site in section 2." "Otherwise, you are on the right track. Good work, Kathy