please help reword this more professionally:

You correctly identified this as a complete. The team diary date is correct, proper NSU template was used, and the salvage screen was completed. Correct branding was You also correctly identified that the key was present at the vendor. You submitted the transmittal form with accurate branding and checked, as well as set follow-up date in the vendor dashboard. You utilized production manager to code documents received at the vendor and loss state. Opportunities: incorrect storage start date was used on the salvage page, please make sure to use the same date as the loss date. Both features were not reviewed on the same touch. TM8 Dy set by the file owner was not deleted prior to you setting a new sold team dairy, please be sure to delete all unneeded team dairies in the future.