Please indicate the differences between paraphrasing and quoting and when to do each.

3. Please find a quote from a paper you have written (in this class or another) and show quotation analysis (intro quote, use quote, discuss quote) for my tutore i want you could choose anything

4. Please find a quote you could have paraphrased and do so.

5. Why should we avoid dropping quotes in? What does it do to the reader?

PART 2

Please read over and answer the question blow

Conclusion samples 1. It may have been obvious to readers before even reading this essay that identity theft is not a positive thing. But its recent progression to be the most harmful technological crime in the US needs to elevate the concern of both citizens and the government. Because of the constant developments in technology and how much we still don't understand, it won't be an easy task to put a stop to identity theft. But the measures we have in place now are sorely outdated, and the high stakes presented by a person's very identity mandates that the government increase budget for fraud lawsuits and security requirements for websites to keep its citizens safe. 2. It is clear from Shakespeare's texts that his witches and other supernatural beings have insight and knowledge into characters' lives and psyches that they would not naturally know. But beyond adept skills at manipulating characters towards evil, self-serving actions, they have no real supernatural power. Macbeth's own hunger for power drove him to commit the murders that led first to his kingship, and then to his death. It was human sin, not supernatural power, that fulfilled the forewarning of the witches. But, rather than fight against their pretense, Macbeth blindly accepts his fate and acknowledges his incorrigible actions as necessary. Both in Macbeth and during the England witch hunts of the 17th century, people ignored the existence of sin in favor of blaming unstoppable forces for humanly actions. In his writings, James VI suggests that "the intentions and wicked dealings of...ungodly creatures" do not have ultimate authority over human action. Shakespeare's theme of overarching supernatural forces attempts to appease the idea of fate, but Macbeth only has himself to blame for his evil deeds. 3. When tax revenue through marijuana sales is directly allocated, legalization can provide not only medical benefits, but social and economic ones as well. Without the financial and man-hour burdens needed to incarcerate innocent citizens, Colorado's police resources can be better spent to keep its people safe. Additionally, the taxes on marijuana and the saved money from other factors can be funneled into social programsmost importantly, our school systems and drug education. Prohibition didn't stop Americans from consuming alcohol in the 1920s, nor will it stop marijuana use today.

Conclusion Activity 1. After reading the conclusion samples, reflect on them a bit. a. Which conclusion is the best? Why? b. Which conclusion needs some work? Why? c. What changes would you make to the conclusion that needs the most work? 2. Review the conclusion you wrote for either paper 1 or paper 2. 3. Copy and paste the conclusion here: 4. Reverse outline the rhetorical moves you made in the conclusion (ex: restate thesis & summarized main points). 5. Identify what you would like to improve on

Revise the conclusion here: