1. Please review the attached emails and make the following changes:

Email #1

• Specify the type of meeting in the subject line.
• Specify in the message the type and purpose of the meeting, where it will be held, the names of attendees, and how long it will last.
• Give the recipient a deadline for responding regarding his or her attendance.
• Delete Should be a blast! It is too casual.

Email 5-8e

• Insert subject line.
• Explain in the message why he or she needs to see Ann. What is so urgent?
• Explain when he or she will be back from lunch.

Email 5-8f

• Give specifics concerning why a TQM team is needed.
• Specify when the team will meet.
• Specify when the individual should get back to the sender.
• Delete smiley faces. They are too casual.

Email 1

Hi Joe,

we are going to have a meeting at noon on Friday. Can you join us? Should be a blast!

Tim

Email 2

Ann need to see you this afternoon---urgent---get back with me as soon as possible---I'm at lunch at now but will be awaiting your response when I get back.

Terri.