plz read the question first do not copy the same for the baby products question this one is for home products. plz do it carefully.

Document for Analysis and Revision Please do the following: . Read the poorly written email below Re-write (revise) the email M . Post your work to this Discussion. . After you post your re-write, read the post of one other person in the class. IN "Reply" to their post and include a constructive comment, pointing out one thing you think they did well in their revision. (Please read the tips on constructive feedback are summarized in Chapter 2, Table 2.1 of the textbook). Here are some questions to ask yourself to guide your revision work, and ensure you apply the chapter content as you revise: What is the real purpose of this message? Could you make it more "direct"? . Which words and phrases are overly complicated, clichd, too informal, or overly formal? Could you replace them with more simple, familiar words or phrases? Which sentences or words are overly negative? Could they be positively phrased? . Are there "I/we" (writer-focused) sentences that could be rewritten with a "you" (audience-focused) attitude? This email is to Therese, a Rwandan maker of very well-made and stylish home decor items. World Styles is writing to Therese because they want to sell Therese's products on their website. However, Therese is very careful about where they showcase their products. Below is the original email; you can see it needs revising! Our online store, World Styles, specializes in only the very best items for discerning customers who want their home spaces to look sensational. We regularly search worldwide looking for items that are good enough and well-built enough and classy enough-good enough that is to take their place alongside the hundreds of other carefully selected items that we show on the pages of our award-winning website, www.workplacestyles.com We shoot for the stars, as the saying goes, every time we select a product to include in our catalogue; we don't want to waste our time with less valuable products that might sell half a dozen units per year-no, we want every product to be a hugely humungous success, selling at least one hundred units per specific model per year in order to justify our expense and hassle factor in adding it to the above mentioned portfolio. After careful consideration, we thusly concluded that your amazing products meet our needs and would therefore like to add it