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"(A) Depression and its causes among the Muslim youth: Depression has been one of the most prevalent mental disorders among the Muslim youth all over the world. There are multiple reasons and causes for the increase of depression among the Muslim youth. I strongly stick to my views as i have closely observed most of the Muslim youth having lost their lives as well, where majority of them are still suffering with multiple diseases and struggling to overcome depression.
Few of the reasons can be understood as improper up-bringing from their parents, lack of motivation, understanding among the families and relations, lack of knowledge and distant relationship with Islam, very less or no physical exercises, lack of adequate sleep, improper food habits, lack of hope, courage and de-motivation from almost the nearest relatives, etc., When the youth do not get the support from their so called close relations including parents, siblings and other relations, they tend to feel ignored, de-motivated and lose the hope on life.
(B) Islam, a ray of hope for the Muslim youth in overcoming the problem of depression: But fortunately, if the youth have even the basic knowledge of Islam, the holy Quran and Hadith, they will be in a position to cope up with the growing problems associated with depression. Islam, is a very vast, solution-oriented and fruitful religion, which has been offering solution to all sorts of problems including depression since the beginning of the human kind on the earth and will keep guiding the Muslim youth forever.
It mostly says, not only the Muslim youth, all categories of individuals need to develop a strong bond with Allah, the creator of the worlds, seas, heavens, land and all the other existing creatures and keep performing regular repentance, even if we have not committed any mistake or a sin. Being close to the creator solves almost all the problems, as he is the one who listens, when a believer calls him at any point of time, when no other person or source can help him while he/she undergoes with any sorts of problems in their life.
(C) Life is a test as per Islam and one can overcome the obstacles by following the Hadith and Sunnah: As per Islamic views, many of the trusted and authentic commentators have provided with reliable and genuine sources, that Islam has its own views on the life of an individual, the problems associated with it, how to deal with them and what should the end of life mean. As per the reliable sources, If the Muslim youth can gain the closeness of Allah, with his acts of worship may it, be praying five times a day after reciting and standing by the Islamic oath as mentioned in the holy Quran till his last breath, fasting in the holy month of Ramadan, giving alms to the poor and needy and visiting the pilgrimage to the holy city of Mecca, he is a performing Muslim and he can easily understand what life has to offer him and how to deal with each stage of life.
The youth needs to understand, that the problems of depression can be easily resolved with the help of just being kind to the people, being honest, sincere, loyal, trust-worthy and promoting peace around the world. Even at the most difficult times of life, when they are faced with major issues in the lives, where there seems no solution, they need to stay strong and should never get addicted to the wrong ways and habits and stick to the teachings of hadith and sunnah. Remembrance of Allah, will help the Muslim youth to gain peace of mind, gain calmness and develop a sense of control on the personal actions and overcome the depression themselves.
(D) Solution for depression for Muslim youth as found in Islamic sources: Islam strongly emphasizes Muslim youth to have patience and faith in Allah and do not lose hope. It supports the youth by providing them with multiple solutions to each and every problems which may result in depression. The problems which usually lead to depression include stress, anxiety disorders, panic attacks, depressive disorders, most commonly marital and financial issues. All these problems lead to helplessness and depression. But Islam strongly supports the Muslim youth to maintain mental health by overcoming these difficult situations with the help of staying close to Allah by the way of prayers, repentance and staying honest and not involving anyone other than Allah in all matters, maintaining patience in life, staying away and protecting oneself from evil eye, and much more.
After a person faces lot of difficulties in life, overcomes depression, fights the unknown personal battles internally and externally, he would have emerged as a strong individual who would have gained patience, strong faith, self-motivation, courage, belief in Islamic values. etc., The Muslim youth will be in a position to deal with every situation of life and they would have gain consciousness by understanding that, every stage of life demands a different kind of person to deal with its problems and emerge victorious.
To conclude, i would say Muslim youth should concentrate on positivity and the blessings in their lives rather than counting their problems which keep multiplying with each passing day. They need to stay close to the holy Quran, follow hadith and sunnah, preach peace, love, kindness, positivity, develop helping nature and specifically do not lose hope at the times of difficulty even if they are going through depression. The stronger the faith in Allah, the more beneficial and more faster it will be in overcoming the depression and all other problems of life.
The Muslim youth needs to develop their own forums, teams, associations and employ the experienced, matured and religious scholars and commentators, to help the youth with dealing with modern problems with modern solutions in the light of Islam by following Quran and Hadith. Having such places of hope, will save lot of Muslim youth in overcoming depression and find solutions to their problems in life and they will gain closeness to Islam."
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