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To: Employees of Small, Local manufacturing company Cc: Marilyn123@gmail.com BCC: Subject: Cancellation of summer picnic Hey everyone Hope you all are good and fine .As everyone know that covid- 19 is affected on our each and every work.There has many problems people face during this pandemic. Having negative ef- fect of economic uncertainty due to the third wave of covid 19 as well as so we don't have enough money to spend on leisure activities. So that our company decided to the cancellation of "summer- fun" picnic of this year, which is organized on 21st May. This leisure activity is the major event of our office. All works including manager from the plants and officers have good time to spend with each other as well as to get together for social interaction. Moving further, Manufacturing company decided to cele- brate to the accomplishment of the industry and honorable workers for their contribution towards the company. Here is the venue of event.we will celebrate our event at 22 joshep banquet hall, hill vally road Ontario. I am. Sharing this infor- mation with you, hope you all are pleased after reading this email. I am sure that you all are appreciated for this decision. If you have any question or inquiry please contact the manager. Best regards Marilyn (Director of human resources) End of document To: Employees of Small, Local manufacturing company Cc: Marilyn123@gmail.com BCC: Subject: Cancellation of summer picnic Hey everyone Hope you all are good and fine .As everyone know that covid- 19 is affected on our each and every work.There has many problems people face during this pandemic. Having negative ef- fect of economic uncertainty due to the third wave of covid 19 as well as so we don't have enough money to spend on leisure activities. So that our company decided to the cancellation of "summer- fun" picnic of this year, which is organized on 21st May. This leisure activity is the major event of our office. All works including manager from the plants and officers have good time to spend with each other as well as to get together for social interaction. Moving further, Manufacturing company decided to cele- brate to the accomplishment of the industry and honorable workers for their contribution towards the company. Here is the venue of event.we will celebrate our event at 22 joshep banquet hall, hill vally road Ontario. I am. Sharing this infor- mation with you, hope you all are pleased after reading this email. I am sure that you all are appreciated for this decision. If you have any question or inquiry please contact the manager. Best regards Marilyn (Director of human resources) End of document

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