Question: comment this proposal assignment below

The website-proposal I have in mind is a musical database that provides lessons via recorded videos or even live lectures. This is to involve instruments of all kinds, not just a single type. In addition to this, it will contain up-to-date information from licensed vendors as well as a store to be able to purchase products from them, along with special financing available. What I want to achieve with this website is to be able to provide an effortless way for musicians of all backgrounds to be able to gather useful information on musical gear without having to dedicate much time to be at a store in person. The website would gather useful information to determine skillset, budget, and musical interests to be able to tailor to customer's needs. I believe this website will have repeat business by offering customers a choice between different levels of monthly subscriptions which will in turn bring a monthly charge. This monthly charge will establish value in what the site offers to the customers and will thus motivate them to return to the site to get their money's worth. I would also plan on creating a discussion board (similar to this one as well as the Discord App) that will influence customers to share tips and recommendations to each other.