Question I (10 marks)

Instructions: Reconstruct the texts below to make them more concise.

Example: (0)

a.

b.

In the month of April, we detected a quality control issue. It was instructed by the CEO that this item be presented by the manager at the next board meeting.

The CEO instructed the manager to present the quality control issue detected last April in the next board meeting.

SECTION B: GRAMMAR 20 MARKS Question I (10 marks) Instructions: Reconstruct the texts below to make them more concise. Example: (0) In the month of April, we detected a quality control issue. It was instructed by the CEO that this item be presented by the manager at the next board meeting. The CEO instructed the manager to present the quality control issue detected last April in the next board meeting (2 marks) a. It is my objective to utilize more fully and satisfactorily both my university educational experience and my skills as an editor, preferably in a full-time employment position with your firm b. As per our discussion with reference to the antiquated and outmoded climate-control system in the Campus Security Building, it is my recommendation that purchase is made from a source-to-be-identified of a new, environmentally-friendly heat pump that is both cost-effective and fully compliant with all local and state regulations (2 marks) c. On the afternoon of June 12 at the most recent meeting of the ad hoc committee on workplace communication policies, each and every member of the committee was in agreement with one another that first and foremost it is imperative that all forms of workplace communications be completely accurate and perfectly clear. (2 marks) d. In consideration of your recent email message received last week re. what is perceived to be the "excess time" required by our company to provide an effective response action to certain problems identified in the aforementioned email, please be assured that it is our policy to respond as promptly as possible to all legitimate customer concerns. (2 marks) An extended discussion of an improved and more robust mission statement that is aligned with the basic fundamental business objectives of this organization will require clearly structured facilitated sessions conducted in full transparency and with the active participation of designated representatives from all departments. (2 marks)