Read the online notes in Chapter on Constructing effective sentences, Improving writing techniques, Revising for conciseness, clarity, vigour and directness. Answer the questions as attached. (Subject English for Business Communications)

Revise the sentences below for conciseness and precision 1. Maria was very petrified when her superior asked her for the report on the status of the development of their Langkawi project. It was such a sudden request which she had not expected. 2. A thorough investigation will be conducted by the relevant authority on the allegation of Aztel's fund misappropriation. A report has been made where three million Ringgit Malaysia is alleged to have been spent irresponsibly. 3. A million Ringgit Malaysia has been allocated by the Real Bank CEO to conduct training to improve the marketing skills of the staff. This was confirmed by the secretary in her email.. It was also mentioned that all sales staff must attend the training. 4. The construction of the new MQF office building and the installing of electrical wiring underwent a halt due to some issues with the foreign workers. Supposedly, it will resume after a mutual understanding between the Malaysian and Indonesian governments on all pending issues has been reached. 5. The manager has made a suggestion where the company will increase the number of operators. This action is needed in order to speed up production. This is because the company needs to meet the sales deadline