REF: Scott DeJong summary assignment `Video gaming can bolster classroom learning, but not without teacher support'

Video gaming can bolster classroom learning, but not without teacher support (theconversation.com)

1. Revise and expand the summary assignment based on Scott DeJong article: Video gaming can bolster classroom learning, but not without teacher support'

2. Identify and analyze strategies used by authors to persuade audiences.

3. PURPOSE of this assignment will reinforceactive and critical reading, thinking, and writing skills as well as elements of the writing process

1) REVISON : resubmitting your new draft as the Revision Assignment.

You should make numerous alterations (at least 5, but substantially more if your initial submission requires it)to areas that could use adjustment based on your previous feedback on the assignment as well as your own independent revision, following the conventions of revision introduced in Module 11.

These revisions could include: adding reporting verbs, strengthening your paraphrases and integration of quotations, creating stronger transitions between points, expanding upon claims, articulating more specific and less evident thesis statements, refocusing on analysis rather than summary in your analysis assignment, staying objective rather than making editorial remarks in your summary assignment

Expand on certain areas based on the feedback you received, as well as your own rereading of the assignment, and anything new you've learned in the course since submitting it.

2) Summary of revisions 5%

Following the reference list of your revised assignment, state a one paragraph summary of your revisions. In a short response describe the changes you made in the first part of the assignment and explaining the reasoning behind them.