Relevant Concepts: Direct$-$order messages, direct operational messages, sentence structure, hidden verbs, cluttering phrases

The following operational message informs employees of a new time$-$saving routing process for creating a bill of materials $($BOM$)$ for manufacturing your company's circuit boards. The BOM includes all resources for making the circuit boards, from purchasing raw materials and parts to assembling and selling the boards, so creating the BOM requires the approval of several divisions within the company. This message is indirect and unclear. In addition, the message contains several sentence errors $($sentence fragments, run$-$on sentences, and comma splices$),$ hidden verbs, and cluttering phrases.

As your instructor directs,

a$.$ Correct the sentence errors and fix the hidden verbs and homophone errors.

b$.$ Indicate how you would revise the message to make ti more direct, better organized, and clearer. Be sure your edits preserve all of the ideas even as you revise or delete material.

c$.$ Retype the message to reflect the revisions you indicated in steps a and b$.$