Subject: Report

Hi there,

Yup I am the same guy you met at the conference last week. I hope by now you must have seen my CV that I sent to you. Do you have any questions to ask regarding that? I also hope you have noticed in my LinkedIn profile that I have a rich experience in this field. So$,$ can I request for a meeting with you whenever you are free? Let me know!

a$.$ Create a brief report that analyzes and critiques the effectiveness of the message. Your report should identify any issues with the message, and explain why the identified components are problematic, as well as offering suggestions and rationale on how the message can be improved.

b$.$ Apply what you have learned about writing effective messages to rewrite the message. When rewriting, you should consider the elements of structure, tone, language, purpose, audience, channel, professional writing techniques, format, and design.