Task $67\mathrm{.}3$: Compare and evaluate the two case studies in terms of the seven criteria listed below:

Begins with a thoughtful, interesting title

Starts with a powerful, clear introduction

Demonstrates a strong conclusion

Represents accurate, thorough citing throughout paper

Shows excellent balance between research and personal voice

Illustrates strong application of sentence variety

Exemplifies careful and skillful editing

Task $67\mathrm{.}4$: Then apply your mind and report which you think is $($a$)$ the better one and why? Also $($b$)$ what is wrong with the other article?