Task

Re$-$write an email to mid$-$level managers. Roy drafted the message on the following page. Re$-$write this message with a focus on the following goals: $(1)$ make the responsibilities and directions clearer; $(2)$ improve the writing style to make the message easier to read; $(3)$ make the message more personable; and $(4)$ briefly provide the background and rationale for the new safety responsibilities and guidelines.