This journal entry is a strategic exercise to plan the revision of your evaluation essay. Reflect on the feedback you've received and your own assessment of your draft to develop a comprehensive revision plan.

Feedback Analysis:

• Begin by summarizing the feedback you received from the peer review. What were the key points of praise or critique? Focus on both the positive aspects and areas suggested for improvement.

Feedback Alignment with Goals:

• Consider any feedback that might not align with your original goals for the essay. Ask yourself:
  • Is there any feedback that seems off-track or contradictory to your objectives?
  • How can you address any confusion or misinterpretation without compromising your essay's intent?
• Reflect on the balance between staying true to your vision and considering your peers' perspectives.

Self-Evaluation:

• Conduct a thorough review of your own draft. Identify elements that you feel still need work. This could include aspects like clarity of argument, supporting evidence, organization, or grammatical accuracy.

Revision Plan:

• Based on the feedback and your self-evaluation, outline a clear plan for revising your essay. Consider:
  • Specific changes you intend to make.
  • How you will address the feedback received.
  • Any additional research or restructuring needed.
  • Steps you will take to enhance the overall quality of your essay.

Structuring Your Journal Entry:

• Use a structured format for your journal entry:
  • Introduction: Briefly explain the purpose of this reflective exercise.
  • Main Content: Address each of the above points in separate paragraphs, detailing your analysis and planning.
  • Conclusion: Summarize your revision strategy and how this exercise has helped clarify your approach.

Your entry will be assessed based on the depth of your reflection, the clarity of your revision plan, and your ability to critically engage with both peer feedback and your own review of the draft. A high-quality submission will demonstrate a thoughtful approach to revising your work and improving your writing skills.

Your multi-paragraph submission should be at minimum about 300 400 word. Please do not list answers.