Which is the most effective application message attention$-$getter?

Findwork.com listed an entry$-$level, human resource position with your company. Organizational behavior and human resources are my areas of study. My superior interpersonal and analytical skills, along with my innovative approach to problem solving, make me an excellent candidate for your human resource position

I would like to be a human resources director in the next $1015$ years; therefore, I would like to apply for the entry$-$level, human resource position your company has posted on Findwork.com. My skills make me a great candidate

Please accept my application for the position you have posted online. I think that it would be an excellent opportunity for me to gain the career experience I am seeking