Write 9 Sentences For Your Response: What is effective, and what improvements can be made for following resume? You must include detailed commentary, including suggestions for improvement. Resume Objective: Dedicated and motivated business major seeking an entry level position as an event coordinator with Dynamic Events Worldwide. EDUCATION San Diego Miramar Community College Summer 2019-Present GPA Fall 2019: -/4.0 Cumulative GPA: -/4.0 Plan to transfer to San Diego State University in Fall 2020 Associates of Science in Business Administration, expected May 2020 Potential emphasis in Hospitality Alfred University, Alfred, NY Fall 2018- Spring 2019 GPA: -/4.0 Dean's li st Fall 2018 and Spring 2019 Scripps Ranch High School, Scripps Ranch, CA High School Diploma, June 2018 GPA: -/4.0 EXPERIENCE Coach's Assistant, Alfred University Softball Office, Alfred, NY August 2018- May 2019 Assisted Coach with tasks around the office, on excel, along with any additional organizational tasks needed. SKILLS Software: Microsoft Office Suite (Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Outlook), Adobe Creative Suite (Photoshop, InDesign, Illustrator) Social Media: Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, LinkedIn Qualities: Excellent time management, strong communication skills, detail oriented, works great in teams. PROJECTS Business 106, Alfred University Spring 2018 Developed Pop-up restaurant with a group of 6 to raise money for the Humane Society. Raised over $200. Marketed our project and brought in customers to raise lots of money. ACTIVITIES Softball Team, Alfred University Fall 2018-Spring 2019 First Baseman, 2018- Spring 2019 Dedicate over 20 hours a week to softball while balancing school and a part-time job. Spring 2014- Spring 2018 Varsity Softball, Scripps Ranch High School Starting First Baseman, 2014-2018 Earned role as a captain senior year Girl Scouts, Scipps Ranch, CA 2005-2012 Completed my Silver Award in 2012 by hosting a softball skills clinic for children ages 4-12