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Write a goodwill close that would be appropriate for the readers of this message. Proofread your work for possible grammar, spelling, and/or style mistakes. (5 points)
From: Mandy Summers, Production Manager
Sent: October 8,202112:18 PM
To: Production Staff Members
Subject: New Machine for Sweet Creations Inc. Starting October 28
(1) Our production employees at Sweet Creations will use a new candy manufacturing machine starting October 28.
(2) Company technicians will install the CandyMaker 650 during the next two weeks. (3) This machine uses many new robotic features. (4) We have come to the conclusion that these features will save much time for our staff.
(5) The CandyMaker also provides important essentials for safety. (6) Unfortunately, our previous machine caused frequent injuries to our employees. (7) Therefore, you will definitely appreciate this new machine.
(8) An orientation with the new machine will take place on Friday, October 25 from 12 to 1 pm.(9) We will congregate in Production Room B, the location for the CandyMaker 650.(10) Hector Galvez will provide training to each of you.
Mandy Summers

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