Dean Pyes, who has been with the company only five weeks, plans to send the following e-mail

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Dean Pyes, who has been with the company only five weeks, plans to send the following e-mail to his supervisor. Knowing this is a business message and that Dean hasn’t had much time to develop a casual, working relationship with his new boss, convert the message to one more appropriate to the situation. Send the revised document to your instructor as an attachment to an e-mail, indicating what is attached. If you are unfamiliar with the initialisms and emoticons used in this message, first try to interpret them based on context, then ask your instructor.
THX 4 making time in your busy schedule yesterday to go over the SOP for presenting a proposal to the directors of development. J2LYK, this is my first F2F presentation to TPTB. BCOZ you t%k the time to explain the decision process here at Whittenberg and Jones, I have made some revisions in the draft of the proposal you revued. When I saw how much work needs to be done to have a proposal accepted, I thought YGTBKM. But I WAN2 do well so I made the appropriate changes.
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Business Communication

ISBN: 978-1439080153

8th edition

Authors: Buddy Krizan, Patricia Merrier, Joyce P. Logan, Karen Schneiter Williams

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