From what you've learned about effective blogging as well as planning and writing business messages in general, you should be able to identify numerous errors made by the writer of the following blog post. After identifying the flaws, draft a version that fixes them.
Get Ready!
We are hoping to be back at work soon, with everything running smoothly, same production schedule and no late projects or missed deadlines. So you need to clean out your desk, put your stuff in boxes, and clean off the walls. You can put the items you had up on your walls in boxes, also.
We have provided boxes. The move will happen this weekend. We'll be in our new offices when you arrive on Monday.
We will not be responsible for personal belongings during the move.
Posted by David Burke at 10:42 AM 09-27-09