Revise this message so that it follows this chapter's guidelines. I'm writing to let you know about my availability for the brand manager job you advertised. As you can see from my enclosed résumé, my background is perfect for the position. Even though I don't have any real job experience, my grades have been outstanding considering that I went to a top-ranked business school. I did many things during my undergraduate years to prepare me for this job:
Earned a 3.4 out of a 4.0 with a 3.8 in my business courses
Elected representative to the student governing association
Selected to receive the Lamar Franklin Award
Worked to earn a portion of my tuition I am sending my résumé to all the top firms, but I like yours better than any of the rest. Your reputation is tops in the industry, and I want to be associated with a business that can pridefully say it's the best. If you wish for me to come in for an interview, I can come on a Friday afternoon or anytime on weekends when I don't have classes. Again, thanks for considering me for your brand manager position.