After you have fixed Dana’s email, answer these questions in an email to your instructor.

■ What revisions did you make? Why?

■ Many grocery stores already contribute to local food pantries.

In addition to some staples, they provide items such as bakery goods that are past their sale date but still quite tasty, sacks for bagging groceries at the pantry, and even shopping carts to transport groceries to the cars of pantry clients. If Bear already contributes to Coastal, how should that fact change the content of Dana’s email?

■ What edits did you make? Why?

■ What impression do you think this email made on the head of human resources? Explain. Do you think he granted Dana’s request? Why or why not?

Submit both your version of Dana’s email and your analysis email.