Write an essay on Pharmacist profile, veterinarian and medical assistant answer peer view word Unity 1.
Question:
Write an essay on “Pharmacist profile, veterinarian and medical assistant “ answer peer view word
Unity
1. Underline the thesis statement. What is the point the writer seems to be making about this career?
2. What information is in the first paragraph of the essay? How does it set up the context of the entire essay?
3. What are the topic and point in each paragraph? Is there a sentence that clarifies those ideas? (Dialog paragraphs will not have a topic sentence).
Development
1. What patterns of development has the student used in this essay to support the thesis? Identify the patterns in each paragraph. Use Chapter 4 in LBH for assistance.
2. List some of the details has the student included. What details need to be added or deleted? Identify by paragraph number where you think the student needs more information or needs to cut less effective details.
3. How has the student used quotes in this essay? Where are the quotes, and what kind of support do they give the thesis? How has the speaker for any quote been cited?
Coherence
1. Look at the student writer’s outline. Does the outline of the essay match its content?
2. Underline the transitions that helped you understand the connections between ideas. Are there places that need a transition?
3. If dialog is used, is it correctly formatted? If not, make suggestions.
D. Overall
1. What ideas are expressed in the closing paragraph?
2. Was the writer a participant-observer or detached-observer? Would a different approach fit the paper better?
3. What are the tone/style of the essay? Are they consistent and appropriate?
4. Is the student depending on the interview for content instead of writing him or herself, or has observation been incorporated effectively?
Materials Science and Engineering An Introduction
ISBN: 978-0470419977
8th edition
Authors: William D. Callister Jr., David G. Rethwisch