1. Document for Analysis: Claim Request: Analyze the following email. Pinpoint its strengths and weaknesses, and then revise the email (but for practice purposes, format it as a memo).

To: Mr.Berkin@precor.com From: Susie.Cue@gmail.com Date: 9/17 / 2019 Subject: My new Precor treadmill Dear Mr. Berkin : When I ordered my Precor treadmill last month, you assured me that it was the best product for cardiovascular fitness. After viewing the videotape you sent, I believed in your product and your company and soon placed my order. I received the treadmill on September 14. The product was easy to set up, and after watching the instructional video and reading the manual, was ready to work out on the Precor. However, I cannot seem to use the unit as shown on the instructional tapeand believe my machine may be defective. have read and followed all the instructions, yet the machine's spin-wheel system produces resistance, which propels me off the front. I would like this problem solved, either through a new machine being sent to me free of charge, or a refund after I return this machine. Please contact me at 706-555-3800 and advise me how I should proceed in this matter.

1. Document for Analysis: Claim Request: Analyze the following email. Pinpoint its strengths and weaknesses, and then revise the email, (but for practice purposes, format it as a memo). To: Mr.Berkin@precor.com From: Susie.Cue@gmail.com Date: 9/17/2019 Subject: My new Precor treadmill Dear Mr. Berkin: When I ordered my Precor treadmill last month, you assured me that it was the best product for cardiovascular fitness. After viewing the videotape you sent, I believed in your product and your company and soon placed my order. I received the treadmill on September 14. The product was easy to set up, and after watching the instructional video and reading the manual, I was ready to work out on the Precor. However, I cannot seem to use the unit as shown on the instructional tape, and believe my machine may be defective. I have read and followed all the instructions, yet the machine's spin-wheel system produces resistance, which propels me off the front. I would like this problem solved, either through a new machine being sent to me free of charge, or a refund after I return this machine. Please contact me at 706-555-3800 and advise me how I should proceed in this matter. 1. Document for Analysis: Claim Request: Analyze the following email. Pinpoint its strengths and weaknesses, and then revise the email, (but for practice purposes, format it as a memo). To: Mr.Berkin@precor.com From: Susie.Cue@gmail.com Date: 9/17/2019 Subject: My new Precor treadmill Dear Mr. Berkin: When I ordered my Precor treadmill last month, you assured me that it was the best product for cardiovascular fitness. After viewing the videotape you sent, I believed in your product and your company and soon placed my order. I received the treadmill on September 14. The product was easy to set up, and after watching the instructional video and reading the manual, I was ready to work out on the Precor. However, I cannot seem to use the unit as shown on the instructional tape, and believe my machine may be defective. I have read and followed all the instructions, yet the machine's spin-wheel system produces resistance, which propels me off the front. I would like this problem solved, either through a new machine being sent to me free of charge, or a refund after I return this machine. Please contact me at 706-555-3800 and advise me how I should proceed in this matter