$8\mathrm{.}3$ Document for Analysis: Poor Direct Request$-$Planning Accessible Conference $($L$.$O$.2)$

As a member of the planning committee for an upcoming conference, you have been asked to draft a message

requesting information about whether the venue is accessible for all participants.

YOUR TASK Analyze this message and list its writing weaknesses. Does this message apply the advice in this chapter for writing requests? If your instructor directs, revise the message using the suggestions you learned in this and previous chapters. Strive to arrange the information in an orderly bulleted list.

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