$9\mathrm{.}5$ Document for Analysis: Request RefusalBitter Taste of the Beach $($L$\mathrm{.}0\mathrm{.}1-4)$

The following blunt refusal from a restaurant owner reject a previously agreed$-$to favor. To avoid endangering a frieno ship and losing community goodwill, the writer needs t revise this message.

YOUR TASK List at least five weaknesses and suggest ways t improve this message. If your instructor directs, revise.

Current date

Ms$.$ Diane Hinchcliffe

Taste of the Beach

$310$ Ocean Avenue, Suite $304$

Carmel$-$by$-$the$-$Sea, CA $93521$

Dear Ms$.$ Hinchcliffe:

Unfortunately, we cannot participate in this summer's Tas of the Beach event. This may be particularly disappointi to you because, merely as a friendly gesture, I had earli agreed to provide a selection of tasty hors d'oeuvres fro my restaurant, The Zodiac. I$\text{'}$m sorry to let you down like th We have participated in the past, but we just can't do it th year because our aging kitchen facilities require major a extensive remodeling.

I heard that this year's Taste of the Beach is really going be a blast with new and old food, wine, music, and artis