Activity $7\mathrm{.}1$

$$ List at least five weaknesses in the email draft. You must list the entire sentence or passage and explain the type of weakness to receive credit.

o Be sure to list weaknesses as discussed in the chapter, not punctuation errors

$$ Refer to the Checklist "Professional E$-$mails and memos" for guidelines on writing professional e$-$mails

Sentence Weakness

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Activity $7\mathrm{.}2$

Identify at least five weaknesses in the "Weak Request Response Requires your revision" blog post. You must list the entire sentence or passage and explain the type of weakness to receive credit.

Sentence Weakness

$1$

$2$

$3$

$4$

$5$

Chapter $8$: Writing Improvement Exercises

$8\mathrm{.}2$ Writing Instructions

$$ Revise the paragraphs in parts $($a$)$ and $($b$)$ into two sets of instructions.

$$ Include an introductory statement or title for each.

Note: Pay close attention to whether or not the instructions need to be performed in order

$$ Use bullets for a non$-$sequential list

$$ Use numbers for steps that need to be performed in order.

Tip: Be careful with tone. You are striving for cooperation, so providing benefits is necessary for compliance.