After finishing your $5$ Dangerous Things critical response, develop a brief outline that shows how this speech could be much improved. Be sure to use what you know from reading Stand Up$,$ Speak Out in developing this outline.

In developing your outline, use the format below. Keep in mind that you are making a revision on Tulley$$s presentation. In your earlier analysis, you should have noted that his speech had no conclusion. So$,$ for this assignment, you will need to imagine what that might look like in order to supply the missing information. Also, you should have noted that he had too many main points for such a short presentation and that he got his points out of order. You will need to decide which three points to leave in as you consider how best to end his presentation.

Introduction

Hook

Thesis

Body

Main point $1$

Main point $2$

Main point $3$

Conclusion

Restated thesis

Closing line