Question: answer part B rewrite this email in bussineslike A. Identify five problems in the following message (5 marks) B. Rewrite the message to be more
A. Identify five problems in the following message (5 marks) B. Rewrite the message to be more businesslike. (5) marks December 15, 2021 Mr. Russell Englewood 176 Scarlet Drive Raleigh, NC 1907 Hey Mr. James Why haven't you paid the rent for the month of November? This is so unacceptable! We need our money. This is our last warning. Ht we don't receive the payment immediately, we will be forced to take action against you. You were really lucky that we gave you a second chance and didnt evict you from the apartment We need to receive the payment within a work, or will take you to court and get our money, and you will be soy you didn't pay earlier. Sincerely, Simon Stacey Simon Stacey Head of Sunshine Real Estate
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