Attempts

$1\mathrm{.}8$

Keep the Highest $\frac{1\mathrm{.}8}{4}$

$4.$ Revising for Clarity $-$ Dropping Clich$$s$,$ Avoiding Slang and Buzzwords, Rescuing Buried Verbs, and Controlling Exuberance

Wordy and unclear writing makes it difficult for your reader to understand your message. During the revision process, revise for clarity by dropping clich$$s$,$ avoiding slang and buzzwords, rescuing buried verbs, and controlling exuberance.

Which of the following are clich$$s that should be dropped from your business messages? Check all that apply.

Enclosed is

Welcome change

Best regards

Think outside the box

Which of the following sentences use slang or buzzwords? Check all that apply.

The teams collaborated to design the product.

It would be rad to have a booth at the trade show.

This strategy is both innovative and cost effective.

The HR seminar on diversity is required for all employees.

Please send me the press release.