COM Public Speaking

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Everyone has someone they admire and want to be like someday and everyone has different opinions and who is the real hero. My hero is my mother, Phuong. She is the person I love most in the world because she was always there when I needed her most and I don't know where I would be today without her. She has blessed me with a wonderful life and I am forever grateful for all she has done for me. No one can compare with my mother. She is the most caring, loving and sincere person I know and that is why she is my hero.

When I think of a hero, I think of someone who is brave, strong, hardworking, reliable, and unselfish. Someone who can protect you and make life better; My mother has all of those qualities. My mother was raised by two wonderful parents and had a very good life growing up. She lives in a small town called Vietnam town, she is a cheerleader, and has graduated from Forbush High School. After graduating from high school, she attended college at Western Carolina University for four years and majored in Education and then went on to the University of North Carolina at Greensboro to earn a master's degree in Administrative Education. My mother had a job during college and worked hard to get good grades and have money to spend. She worked very hard and did whatever it took to make her dreams come true. She always told me college was the best years of her life and enjoy your youth while you can.

A hero to me is someone who is always there for you no matter what; They will always be there for you even when times get tough. My mom never left me, and I know she will always be there for me whether I'm sad and crying or I'm celebrating a new achievement in my life. I have never met a selfless person like her. She always puts me first and does everything she can to be the best mother and give me the best life. Tolerating for me is not easy. I am erratic, stubborn, sometimes I think I know it all. My mother and I don't have a perfect relationship. We argue and disagree about many things, but no matter how much we argue, we always make up at the end of the day because we both know we can't live without each other.

One of my mother's great traits was that she was very strong. Last October my mother was diagnosed with breast cancer. When she told me the news, I completely lost it. All these thoughts started running through my head about how difficult this would be and how bad the outcome could be, but then I started thinking about how strong she is and how she will be. overcome this and beat the cancer. In December, my mother had surgery to remove the cancer and everything turned out great; they removed all the cancerous masses. We are all very thankful and lucky that the surgery went so well. She has just started radiation therapy and is halfway through. She really makes cancer look so easy. The fact that my mother survived breast cancer makes her even more of a hero to me than before. She is fearless and has always known that she will overcome this difficulty in her life and that God has a plan.

My mother is my hero not only for what she gives and gives back to me but to others she is a wonderful wife, mother and friend. All the qualities she has as a person that I hope I can one day be just like her. She made me feel like the most important person in the world, because I knew she would do anything for me in a heartbeat if I needed it or got hurt. Words cannot even describe the love I have for my mother, and how lucky I am to have such a wonderful mother. She always taught me to love myself and be proud of who I am. My mom always said that you should do whatever makes you happy and be the best person you can be. She's my hero for more than a few reasons. She's been with me for 17 years now and I know there's more to come. Nothing can compare to the impact she has made in my life. I wouldn't be the woman I am today without her.

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And this is an SAMPLE PERSONAL SIGNIFICANCE FORMAL PREPARATION OUTLINE pls followed by the sample:

SAMPLE PERSONAL SIGNIFICANCE FORMAL PREPARATION OUTLINE ***Please do not just copy and change my words --- this is a sample to demonstrate formatting*** Student Name CRN: Title: The Nutrition Class that Changed my Life Introduction: I. Attention-getter: With sweaty palms, weak knees, and this same backpack on my shoulders, I slowly made my way to the door and nodded in gratitude to the person who held it open for me. With anxiety having a firm grip of my tongue and a massive frog in my throat, I sat down in the 3rd row from the front, telling myself Blend in! Blend in! Do not sit in the front! Class begins, and surprised, I look back to see that everyone has sat behind me and I was the front row. This was my first experience in a school, exactly one year ago. II. Thesis: I would like to share with you how my experience in the Human Nutrition class here at Mission College, my first class ever in a school, had a very positive impact on the student I am today. III. Preview of speech: My experience in that class helped me get over my nerves and anxiety I had about being in a school, it made me more confident as a student, and it exposed me to a career that I am seriously considering. Transition: To begin, I should probably mention that I have been homeschooled all my life up until college, so having this first class at Mission College really helped me to get out of my comfort zone. Body: I. Main point: My first experience in a class helped me feel less nervous and anxious about school in general. A. Being in a class disproved a lot of the misconceptions I had in my head about school. I was a lot more nervous because I did not know what the instructors would be like. 1.For example, one of the major misconceptions I had about college classes was the instructors being rude, tough, challenging, and would be all up in your face. 2.This was not true, and I slowly learned that a lot of my misconceptions about college and college instructors were wrong. I had no need to be so nervous to interact with instructors. B. Initially, I had my reservations about interacting with other college students and my classmates. 1.Again, I thought college students would be standoffish or not opening to talking with me. 2.Going through the class I realized I did not have anything to be nervous about. a. Most of my classmates were helpful, funny, and easy to get along with 3.I could relate to everyone on the basic principle that we all wanted to learn or at least pass the class to move on with our education. Transition: Once I could control my nerves a little better, I could now focus on me as a student. II. Main point: By taking that class I became more confident as a student. A. I did not think I was capable of taking and passing a college class. 1. Getting an A in that class proved to myself that if I worked hard enough, I could excel in classes. 2. I realized that I was not any dumber just because I had never gone to a traditional school. B. I brought this confidence to all of my other classes

1. I have now taken 15 classes at Mission College 2. I approach all of my classes with confidence in my abilities and hard work. Transition: Finally, I think the main benefit I took away from this experience was the introduction to a career path that really interested me. III. Main point: In this class, I was exposed to a subject that intrigued me and that I am now seriously considering. A. Nutrition sounded interesting in the catalog, but that is all I really thought about it. 1. I loved learning about the topic. Each class talked about topics that related to me and I found them fascinating. 2. I developed a passion for nutrition and becoming a nutritionist. B. Now, nutritionist is one of my top career choices. 1. I am in the process of figuring out what I want to do and where I want to go, and nutrition is where I am leaning. 2. This class put me on this nutrition path, and I am grateful. Transitions: I would like to summarize my positive experience for you all Conclusion: I. Thesis restatement: Overall, my Nutrition class was a very positive educational experience that may dictate the rest of my future! II. Main point review: This one nutrition class helped me get over my anxiety, be more confident, and find a great possible career. III. Closing statement: The day of the final came, I fist-bumped my buddies and wished them good luck with their studies, thanked the teacher, slung my backpack over my shoulder, and walked out of that same door, but this time with a big smile on my face.