Criticize the following thank-you message from a college student to a professor who has sent he a
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Criticize the following thank-you message from a college student to a professor who
has sent he a job lead. (LO6)
Subject: Thanks
Hey, Prof. Smith,
Thanks for the hot tip on the job! I'm interviewing there tomorrow!
Sarah
Rewrite:
Subject: It is too brief and abrupt. Thanks" for what?
Hey, Prof. Smith": It's is too informal an address
Thank you for the lead on sales position at XYZ Company. I am interviewing tomorrow.
Sarah
Discuss your criticism before your re-write? Also, What could I add to the rewrite message?
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