Direction: Read and Evaluate the letter for content and tone. As the weeks activity requires you to compose an email to a supervisor, consider professional tone.Identify some characteristics of professional tone.Explain how the writer could revise and improve this message.And assess what questions or impressions the reader might form of the employee who wrote this email.

read the email below and write in a paragraph on Evaluate the letter for content and tone. As the weeks activity requires you to compose an email to a supervisor, consider professional tone.Identify some characteristics of professional tone.Explain how the writer could revise and improve this message.And assess what questions or impressions the reader might form of the employee who wrote this email.

To: Sally Supervisor

From: Jane S.

Subject: hi

Dear Sally,

i need to work from home on Mondays so I can pick up my son from school. you let Mark leave early and it is only fair to give everone the same flexibility. Let me know if I can do that, otherwise I need to find a babysitter which is hard for my family right now.

Jane