Question: Directions: Study both the scenario and e-mail message rough draft below. Then, answer each question. When answering Questions 1 - 3, you may create fictional



Directions: Study both the scenario and e-mail message rough draft below. Then, answer each question. When answering Questions 1 - 3, you may create fictional information if necessary. SCENARIO You are the HR manager for HealthFirst Inc. Your company's accountant has recently informed you that your workers' compensation insurance premiums are higher than industry standards. Along with this, you have noticed that employees are taking more sick days this year due to stress and mental health issues compared with last year. You have shared this information with your company CEO, Jean Miller. Realizing the connection between physical fitness and employee well-being, Jean has suggested that you research some options for improving employee health and fitness at the company. Specifically, she has asked you to report your recommendation in an e-mail message, using direct order, by April 8. After careful research, you have concluded that the company should implement an employee fitness program, starting June 1. Last week, you had written a rough draft of the e-mail message to Jean, as shown below. However, after proofreading your rough draft, you realize that you will need to fix your mistakes before sending the final draft to your company CEO. E-mail Message - ROUGH DRAFT DATE: March 28, 2021 TO: Jean Miller, CEO SUBJECT: (1) An increase in workers' compensation (WC) insurance premiums has been observed in our company over the past 12 months. (2) In addition, employees have taken more sick days this year. (3) On March 1 you asked me to research some options to reduce WC claims and ameliorate the health of our employees. (4) I recommend that we introduce an employee fitness program in several stages, beginning in June. (5) With a fitness program, we can ensure the health and safety of each and every employee. (6) I offer my full support with implimenting this program. (7) Please don't hesitate to contact me with any questions. (8) According to researchers, workplace fitness is important for many reasons. (9) For example, if employees will exercise regularly, they will improve their general health levels. (10) Therefore, we can save money due to fewer employee sick days. (11) You can read about the many program options in the attachment, Program Details." (12) It is a practical resource for creating effective fitness programs. (13) It can also be used to design a timeline for each stage of the program. 9. Which sentence contains two words that are redundant? a. b. Sentence 2 Sentence 5 Sentence 6 (none of the above) c. d. 10. Which sentence uses formal wording? a. b. Sentence 2 Sentence 3 Sentence 10 (none of the above) c. d. 11. Which sentence(s) use(s) an abstract noun as its simple subject? a. b. Sentence 1 Sentence 2 Sentence 8 (both a and c above) c. d