Edit the notice for style and tone. Paste your revised notice under the original so I can see your suggested edits.

Once you've edited the notice, write a brief memo from yourself to Olivia $(200-250$ words$)$ that summarizes your major editorial suggestions. Focus on justifying your $2-3$ primary style improvements. Your goal is to persuade Olivia to accept all your style suggestions, so support your recommendations by citing the suggested principles in your textbook.