Every chapter provides an editing exercise to build your grammar and mechanics skills. The following letter Requires edits and proofreading, grammar, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and writing techniques covered in this chapter. Cho3 Editing Challenge.docx Minimize File Preview Page of 2 200M + Body Fitness Training Massage I Wellness 2003 colher do FL 302 June 4, 2019 M. Allen C Fineberg 3250 Ponciana Way Palm Beach Gardens, FL 33110 Dear Mr. Fineburst You probably choose Body Fitness because it has became one of the top-rated gyms in the Palm Beach area. Making your work out enjoyable has always been out principal goal. To continue to provide you with the best equipment and programs, your foedback is needed by my partner and myself We have build an outstanding program with quality equipment, excellent training programs, and our support statt is very helpful. We fel, however, that we could have a more positive affect and give more individual attention if we could extend our peak usage time you have probable noticed that attendance at the gym rises from 4 pm to 8pm. We wish it was possible to accommodate all our customers co their favorite equipment during those hours Although we can't stretch an hour. We would like to make better use of the time between 8 pm and 11 pm. With more members' coming later, we would have less crush from to 8pm. Our exercise machines and strength-training equipment is lying idle later in the evening To encourage you to stay Inter, security cameras for our parking area are being considered by us Cameras We have build an outstanding program with quality equipment, excellent training programs and out support staff is very belpful. We feel however, that we could have a more positive affect and give more individual attention if we could extend our peak usage time. You have probable noticed that attendance at the gym raises from 4pm to 8pm. We wish it was possible to accommodate all our customers on the favorite equipment during those hours. Although we can't stretch an bou. We would like to make better use of the time between 8 pm and 11 pm. With more members' coming later, we would have less crush from 4 to 8 pan. Our exercise machines and strength-training equipment is lying idle later in the evening To encourage you to stay later, security cameras for our parking area are being considered by us Cameras for some inside facilitys may also be added. We love gave this matter a great deal of thought. Although Body Fitness have never had an incident that endangered a member. We have went to considerable trouble to leam about security cameras. Because we think that you will feel more comfortable with them in action Please tell us what you think, fill out the enclosed questionnaire, and drop it in the ballot box during your next visit at the desk. We are asking for your feed back about scheduling your workouts, selecting your equipment, and if you would consider coming inter in the evening. If you have my other suggestions for reducing the crush at penk times. Please tell us on the enclosed form Cordially Nicolas Barajas, Manager