examples, describe any APA documentation errors and$/$or faulty paraphrasing in the student's work. If the student's work is plagiarized, even if marginally, revise the student's work so that i follows APA guidelines.

Original Excerpt $1$

Managing performance through a divide$-$and$-$conquer strategy will set at odds the very people who must coordinate with each other. $[$Author is Jody Hoffer Gittell; excerpt is from page $16]$

Student Work $1$

According to Jody Hoffer Gittell $(2004),$ managing performance through a divide$-$and$-$conquer strategy will set at odds the very people who must coordinate with each other.

Any Errors? Or Faulty Paraphrasing? If necessary, revise with correct APA documentation.