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Referencing words Gerunds as sentence starters Relative clauses Linking words/phrases including transitional phrases btwn sections Passives Hedging language Variety of tenses Appropriate vocabulary Must codify an adequate amount of your transcript. Use the table below. Add the timing (from... to...) for each section (e.g. Introduction 0.00-0.21). Hi this is John In this screencast I am going to do the SWOT analysis for Bahrain New International Airport. Introduction (0.00 to 0.07) Strength (0.08 to 0.31) Weakness (0.32 to 0.53) Opportunity First strength, the capacity is a lot bigger than the old one. It have a capacity of five times bigger when it comes to the terminal, and it can accept more than 14 million passengers each year. As a result, we will have more customers, more passengers traveling After that weaknesses. Operation cost, as we know it is going to be operated by a government entity. Which will lead to a leak of profit because government is involved in it. As a result, it would not have a high income or a high profit. Which normally it is not good for an airport. After that opportunities. Employment rate, it is going to increase the employment rate in kingdom of Bahrain. How is that? Because the new airport provide us with more than 3000 new jobs. And 80% of the jobs are for Bahraini. Which mean more employment rate, less unemployment rate. Which is a good for our country. Finally threats. Competition, it is very competitive in this region regardless the highest latest technology we have still. For example, Dubai Airport it has a good location as we do but it does have the technology as well, but the capacity is a lot bigger than our airport let's say five or ten times bigger. And house airlines holding as well is bigger and passenger is massive. Which is a very competitive for us. As a result, there is a competition from them which could take the passengers from us. To conclude. This was my SWOT analysis for Bahrain New International Airport. Thank you have a nice day. (0.52 to 1.19) Threat (1.20 to 2.00) Concluding sentence (2.01 to 2.18) Assess yourself using the checklist below. Use bullet points in comments noting what was good satisfactory and what needs improvement and give justifications. . Give examples from the screencast with appropriate timings. Refer to WS10 Presentation 3 PPT for examples. Suggest alternative answers if the comment was good, correct the mistake if it needs improvement, or identify where something could have been used but wasn't Comments: Examples Alternative answers Criteria Details of criteria Good, satisfactory or needs improvement with justification with correct time references Provides two relevant alternatives with correct time references Referencing words Gerunds as sentence starters Cohesion Relative clauses (Use of all) Linking words/phrases including transition phrases between sections Passives Grammar Hedging language Variety of tenses? Do not complete - Provide a variety of examples where possible e.g. different referencing words or tenses. Do not mention specific numbers of how many times something is used. Instead comment on the variety and frequency of use. Also comment on appropriacy or accuracy of use. "If mistakes are made, correct them first before providing alternatives for correct usage. In examples include what is being referred to, and don't mention a referencing word multiple times if it is used repeatedly to refer to the same thing every time. Include relative pronoun + clause (not just relative pronoun) A variety is more than two tenses used. Categorise tenses using appropriate subheadings eg. present simple, future simple (will), present perfect simple, etc. In examples use subheadings to indicate the function e.g. addition, contrast, result, etc., and do not mention a linking word/phrase multiple times if it is used many times eg. and. Referencing words Gerunds as sentence starters Relative clauses Linking words/phrases including transitional phrases btwn sections Passives Hedging language Variety of tenses Appropriate vocabulary Must codify an adequate amount of your transcript. Use the table below. Add the timing (from... to...) for each section (e.g. Introduction 0.00-0.21). Hi this is John In this screencast I am going to do the SWOT analysis for Bahrain New International Airport. Introduction (0.00 to 0.07) Strength (0.08 to 0.31) Weakness (0.32 to 0.53) Opportunity First strength, the capacity is a lot bigger than the old one. It have a capacity of five times bigger when it comes to the terminal, and it can accept more than 14 million passengers each year. As a result, we will have more customers, more passengers traveling After that weaknesses. Operation cost, as we know it is going to be operated by a government entity. Which will lead to a leak of profit because government is involved in it. As a result, it would not have a high income or a high profit. Which normally it is not good for an airport. After that opportunities. Employment rate, it is going to increase the employment rate in kingdom of Bahrain. How is that? Because the new airport provide us with more than 3000 new jobs. And 80% of the jobs are for Bahraini. Which mean more employment rate, less unemployment rate. Which is a good for our country. Finally threats. Competition, it is very competitive in this region regardless the highest latest technology we have still. For example, Dubai Airport it has a good location as we do but it does have the technology as well, but the capacity is a lot bigger than our airport let's say five or ten times bigger. And house airlines holding as well is bigger and passenger is massive. Which is a very competitive for us. As a result, there is a competition from them which could take the passengers from us. To conclude. This was my SWOT analysis for Bahrain New International Airport. Thank you have a nice day. (0.52 to 1.19) Threat (1.20 to 2.00) Concluding sentence (2.01 to 2.18) Assess yourself using the checklist below. Use bullet points in comments noting what was good satisfactory and what needs improvement and give justifications. . Give examples from the screencast with appropriate timings. Refer to WS10 Presentation 3 PPT for examples. Suggest alternative answers if the comment was good, correct the mistake if it needs improvement, or identify where something could have been used but wasn't Comments: Examples Alternative answers Criteria Details of criteria Good, satisfactory or needs improvement with justification with correct time references Provides two relevant alternatives with correct time references Referencing words Gerunds as sentence starters Cohesion Relative clauses (Use of all) Linking words/phrases including transition phrases between sections Passives Grammar Hedging language Variety of tenses? Do not complete - Provide a variety of examples where possible e.g. different referencing words or tenses. Do not mention specific numbers of how many times something is used. Instead comment on the variety and frequency of use. Also comment on appropriacy or accuracy of use. "If mistakes are made, correct them first before providing alternatives for correct usage. In examples include what is being referred to, and don't mention a referencing word multiple times if it is used repeatedly to refer to the same thing every time. Include relative pronoun + clause (not just relative pronoun) A variety is more than two tenses used. Categorise tenses using appropriate subheadings eg. present simple, future simple (will), present perfect simple, etc. In examples use subheadings to indicate the function e.g. addition, contrast, result, etc., and do not mention a linking word/phrase multiple times if it is used many times eg. and