Good morning

I am doing an advanced function project for Make the world a better place - I wanted to ask if my proposal sounds good.

Background of the project is to make a pitch to a host of reality tv show where entrepreneurs request funding for a projects, or products designed to reduce the damage to the environment caused by human activity.

I chose afforestation

My proposal is - There is so many different solutions which can help in improving the state of the environment in our country Canada. Looking at our areas planted through the years in Canada. I say we break down abandonment properties and plant trees.we can make it a illegal act if people cut down planted trees or hunt there.

Is this a good proposal