I. Using the tips above and other techniques, revise these e-mail messages to make them more effective. All of these examples come from capstone design projects.

a. A team member sends her draft of the traffic analysis section of a report to the team leader. Ali, Here is a decent rough draft of my part. I will look over it again tomorrow and then bring a printed copy to our meeting. I have a few questions about a couple things.... See ya later, Andrea

b. A team leader e-mails clients in a city bureau office about a meeting set up for the next Thursday, April 5.

Dear Bernard and Regina, Thank you for making availability in your busy schedules to meet with our team about the Henderson Parkway Realignment project. We look forward to meeting with you both about said project. Could you please inform us of the venue for the gathering once the meeting room is arranged? Thank you, Kevin Koh